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英语写作熊猫姐2018-03-20 13:22:35

错误一:My father is a worker. 我老爸是个“工作者”。

拜托,谁老爸没事在家葛优躺啊,都得工作啊,都是工作者,不能这么说哈。

换成:My father is an office worker. 我老爸是个办公室职员。

或者 My father is an office employee.



错误二:--Do you like animals ? 如何进行开头的回答呢?
---Yes, I like. (×) 有语法错误,主谓宾不全。
---Yes, I like animals. (×) 不自然,像机器人说话,抄了考官词汇和语法。
---Yes, I like dogs. (×) 没有名词的过渡。


建议说成:

--Yeah, why not? 咋可能不喜欢呢

--Not too bad. 还行哦
--They are really my cup of tea. 还真是我的菜




错误三:Would you like to be a teacher ? 

---Yes, I will be a teacher. (×) 相信我,这么说的话还得再刷一次考位的.

---Yes, I can be a teacher. (×)



错误四:part2的开头:I'd like to introduce...(×)

introduce 一般是用来介绍人的,用在所有part2很奇怪。

建议换成:I'd like to describe...


错误五:直接说汉语

I'm quite into xi you ji. (×) 

这...你是去考汉语9分的嘛,请说Journey to the west,并且后面最好是加上一个从句修饰,如:which is a famous Chinese novel. 要不然他不知道你在说神马,一个人坐在空荡荡的考场对你强颜欢笑。还是得对你笑的,虽然心里在骂你,但毕竟你是交过钱的客户,也不敢不笑,你还真以为你说得很好吗?


I'm partial to Zhou Jielun. (×)

请说Jay Chou,加上who is a well-known singer in China. 谢谢配合


I'm quite into Ma Yun. (×) 

请说 Jack Ma ,加上who is a successful businessman in my country. 谢谢配合


I'm fascinated by tang hu lu. (×)

请说sugar-coated haws,加上 which is a kind of popular food in Beijing. 谢谢配合







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